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May 27, 2007


Kevin H.

I'm grateful for your comments, Kyle, thank you. I hope to be posting more again in the next few months. We've been building a new house, and I completely underestimated how time consuming this would be!

Kyle French

Hey! Nice to see a Christian poet with such good reading taste. A friend pointed me to this poem and I wanted to say I enjoyed it and I wish you were still posting. Serious Christian poets are hard to come by.

A suggestion: Your first stanza has a bit more complicated rhyme scheme than the others, and some enjambment, which really caught my attention and got me reading all the way through the poem. I wish you'd been able to keep that pattern up throughout, since it really heightens the effect.

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